so, you might have read this one quite a few times before but this time, i think this is really my last revision. 
on a scale of 1 to 10, how is it?
The sun has set.
My pen sleeps peacefully.
Sheets of snow
Spread across my desk.
Growing higher, heavier.
Even colder with each breath.
I sit amid winter.
Within, I fight storm.
The skies spew whips
The earth below wavers.
suggestions and comments are welcome, too.
I really love it. I write poetry too, and I know you can get alot of criticism about it. Poetry is not about what other people think though. its about how you feel. It sounds really amazing.
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