So whaddya think? (I love Bill Watterson's verse...)?
Jaime-EP/BR/JM under the influence of fizzy izzy, nom
Jaime sits alone all day
Upon the old rag rug
Making noises for his trains-
Oh how they choot and chug!
His stomach rumbles, he gets up
And makes himself his dinner
His mother’s chocolate, his father’s booze
Befit this little sinner
As he sits and eats his spoils
He glances to her chair-
A moment’s guilt- the first he’s felt-
But still! ‘She was unfair!’
It was not she who brought upon
The fury of her child
But oh, the man, whose sternest hand
The tiny tot reviled
The leather, brass-tacked, red wing chair
Sits empty in the den
The pipe and book sit neat beside
A drooling fountain pen
The kitchen light is off and now
The oven clicks and cleans
Disposing of what left there was
Denying him his dreams
OMG. That was great!!! Really nice writing, i LOVE the ending. lol. But... some of you adjectives are ~~~~~ eh.
Old Rag Rug. Old Rug isn't that good an adjective. Other wise its AWESOME. Sad ending, made me shiver.
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