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Critique My Poem "Elephant Elephant" Coinciding with Obama Visit to India?
Elephant, elephant, elephant
You awesome mighty creature
The children are fond of you
We all love you
Adore you
You little cute
All the day you are busy
munching bales of food
You have awesome trunk
one of a kind
We look at it with amuse
You use it for eating, drinking
and smashing the trees
Your tusks are wonder
and a great tool
You are star at circus
performing great acts
Your earn your wages
With sacks of peanuts
and bundles of sugar canes
History wrote about you
you were warrior
fearless at wars
In India you are honored
Fancied with ornaments
and they call you
Lord Ganeesh
http://sherifviewpoems.blogspot.com/2009/06/sherifview-poem-elephant-elephant.html
Very nice poem.
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